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PostSubject: Goodbye x   Thu Sep 30, 2010 2:13 am

Nothing prepared me for what I was about to hear.
I never thought I’d lose everything I held so dear.
The times we had together, they flicker in my mind.
How it all makes sense now, never knew I was so blind.
You took advantage of my young and carefree heart.
You lied to me; convinced me we were never going to part.
But you went crawling back to her with that sorry look in your eyes.
I should have seen it coming – it shouldn’t have been a surprise.
I grieved and wallowed and cried for you but still you just don’t care.
I let you kill me in your own little way but now its just not fair.
It’s time to say Goodbye baby, it’s all been said and done.
I gave you everything; you’ve had more than your fair share of fun.
You don’t think I’m strong enough, I guess that’s partly true.
How could anyone turn their back on someone as perfect as you?
But if I don’t escape now I know I never will.
And I know that if I do come back you’ll strive to hurt me still.
There’ll always be a part of me lost in the tears you’ll never cry.
But just for now, my one and only love, this has to be Goodbye.



Uhm, hope you like it. I got it published, but according to some idiot at school my rhymes are woollen? xD
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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Thu Sep 30, 2010 7:43 am

I kind of like it. Better then anything the idiots at my school could do.

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Fri Oct 08, 2010 2:54 am

Thanks Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Wed Oct 27, 2010 6:46 pm

HEY!?

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Sat Oct 30, 2010 10:03 pm

Uhmmm.... Hey! xD
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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Sat Oct 30, 2010 10:13 pm

*Rolls eyes at Mi'j.*

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Wed Nov 17, 2010 10:04 pm

Hi. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Sun Nov 21, 2010 2:20 am

Hey :L
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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Mon Nov 22, 2010 6:35 am

He's finally back...

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Mon Nov 22, 2010 6:40 am

AS AM I! REJOICE!

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Mon Nov 22, 2010 9:37 am

Yes yes, much rejoicing... Blah...

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Tue Dec 21, 2010 12:09 pm

Shali's face is suddenly smothered in pie. Teeheehee.

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Tue Dec 21, 2010 9:33 pm

MI'J!

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Wed Dec 22, 2010 8:38 pm

WHAAAAAT, MOTHER!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Wed Dec 22, 2010 9:10 pm

Not you're mother. And keep that pie away from my face!

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Wed Dec 22, 2010 11:41 pm

Mi'j slams pie into boobs.

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Thu Dec 23, 2010 12:07 am

*SLAP!*

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Sat Dec 25, 2010 12:29 am

LOL! ~slams pie into Mi'J's face~ Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Sat Dec 25, 2010 3:43 am

XD

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Sat Jan 08, 2011 3:08 am

Imitates Shali and starts acting like an idiot.

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Sat Jan 08, 2011 6:18 am

Hey....

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Fri Jan 21, 2011 1:03 am

"Nag nag nag nag." in an annoying voice.

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Fri Jan 21, 2011 6:35 am

Shade tries to remain unobtrusive, hoping no one looks to him for an adult figure...

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Fri Jan 21, 2011 7:27 am

*Evil laughter*

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PostSubject: Re: Goodbye x   Fri Jan 21, 2011 8:42 am

*Hides*

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